Dream Planet Loan Away

Narrative Pitch, Episode Script, Flowchart, and Tone Guide for a Bleak Sci-Fi Story Game. Work as a loan officer in an alien loan shark above ruined Earth. Judge strange clients, manage risk, and survive a system built to erase you.

Format

Genre

Year

Type

Narrative Pitch, Episode Script, Flowchart, Tone Guide

Sci-fi, Dystopian, Poetic, Systemic

2024 (Updated 2025)

Personal Project

Alien loan evaluation in a dystopian sci-fi world.

Story Overview

On a broken Earth drifting in space, you work for an alien loan shark issuing high-risk loans to humans, hybrids, and off-worlders. Each application is a story—some manipulative, some tragic, all begging for a second chance. You read. You decide. You approve or deny. The more empathy you show, the more the system fights back. And as the pressure builds, cracks begin to show in the stories, the company, and yourself.

What’s Inside (scroll down to read)

Narrative Pitch
Episode Script
Flowchart
Tone Guide
Originally developed during the Narrative Design Awards 2024 with a small international team. I led the narrative design, worldbuilding, and all in-game writing. This portfolio version has been fully rewritten and restructured as a solo project to reflect my original vision.